spartacus

Its mostly just in my eyes that this describes a coward because of people I know;) Thankyou!

Wow! The poem has really great rythme and a fantastic tempo. The tempo is even and well kept. It lacks visual coherence but is very good. Good job! ~spartacus~

This is truly great! I loved it and was amazed. It was riveting and had a strong visual coherence! The rythme and tempo were subtle and even. No rhymes which ...

That was great. It had visual coherence and great description. I could see the meaning. The tempo is uneven and the rythme is good but unkept. Keep on writing! ~spartacus~

GO SKINS!!! That was fantastic! Congratulations on finishing your novel! ~spartacus~

Hehe... This is original and funny.Its different and riveting.Intensely written although not serious!Magnifiscent and hilarious! Great job! ~spartacus~ the serious person I am is on a coffee break as

The poem is slightly cliche but you have your origanality in there with your word choice.Truly wonderful rythme.The rhyming and tempo could not be more intense.Fantastic! WOW great job! Keep ...

It was good and reminded me of love.I am geussing someone had a goodday? I think you should add maybe something like "and its days like this that make me ...

I liked it because it showed how behind every smile is a lie or a sorrowful painted a picture in my head and i loved the visual coherence you had.I ...