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Re: Look for the Sun (4 poems in 1)
Hello there, sophomoric here for a review. Okay, so first of all, I love your poem. I can totally relate to this. Like how whichever way you turn, whatever path ...
Jul 19, 2014 -
Re: Soon I'll Be A Star
Hello there! Sophomoric here for a review. I've actually also toyed with this thought of what we become of after we die and if stars had minds like us. Your ...
Jul 18, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 1:The Apocalypse
Your story is coming along quite well. You write great descriptions. However, I would advise you not to start off a story with a character waking up. This concept has ...
Jul 1, 2014 -
Re: A letter of complaint to the gossipy girls in gym class
Hm, it seems unlike some of the reviewers here, I actually appreciate repetition. I think you did a wonderful job and wow do I agree with the last two lines. ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Nature Walk
This is so cute. I love the way you described things. It paints a vivid picture in my head. However, the "&" parts are sort of weird for me. Seeing ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: The Lake(story made in 3rd grade)
You know, this perfectly captures the mind of a third grader. Carefree, youthful, naive, and mischievous. I know you wrote this as a young kid so I won't get on ...
Jun 29, 2014
