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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Look for the Sun (4 poems in 1)

    Hello there, sophomoric here for a review. Okay, so first of all, I love your poem. I can totally relate to this. Like how whichever way you turn, whatever path ...

    Jul 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Soon I'll Be A Star

    Hello there! Sophomoric here for a review. I've actually also toyed with this thought of what we become of after we die and if stars had minds like us. Your ...

    Jul 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 1:The Apocalypse

    Your story is coming along quite well. You write great descriptions. However, I would advise you not to start off a story with a character waking up. This concept has ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A letter of complaint to the gossipy girls in gym class

    Hm, it seems unlike some of the reviewers here, I actually appreciate repetition. I think you did a wonderful job and wow do I agree with the last two lines. ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Nature Walk

    This is so cute. I love the way you described things. It paints a vivid picture in my head. However, the "&" parts are sort of weird for me. Seeing ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: The Lake(story made in 3rd grade)

    You know, this perfectly captures the mind of a third grader. Carefree, youthful, naive, and mischievous. I know you wrote this as a young kid so I won't get on ...

    Jun 29, 2014


You know that place between sleep and awake, that place where you still remember dreaming? That’s where I’ll always love you. That’s where I’ll be waiting.
— J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan