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  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: When'ere I Think of Thee

    Great! However, you messed up your rhyming scheme in the last four lines. Otherwise, I loved it. The rhymes did not seem forced and it really flowed.

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I want to go home, but the world is flat.

    Amazing! Very thought-provoking.

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: Truly Unforgiven

    Great! Really shows what life's like!

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: The Rose

    Lovely! I really like the second to last paragraph. I also like the last paragraph. The first two paragraphs have a lot of cliches though; you might want to stay ...

    Apr 2, 2014


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