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Re: When'ere I Think of Thee
Great! However, you messed up your rhyming scheme in the last four lines. Otherwise, I loved it. The rhymes did not seem forced and it really flowed.
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Re: I want to go home, but the world is flat.
Amazing! Very thought-provoking.
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: Truly Unforgiven
Great! Really shows what life's like!
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: The Rose
Lovely! I really like the second to last paragraph. I also like the last paragraph. The first two paragraphs have a lot of cliches though; you might want to stay ...
Apr 2, 2014