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Oh. Thanks for the help! I never realized i had put so many "and"s in it until it was pointed out.

First of all, on the fourth line, "wether" should be spelled as "whether" I think the middle part of the poem is genius. The beginning and end could use a ...

This is my critique for the prologue. Anything Prologue-related in my earlier critique can be forgotten, but i still advise changing the things i mentioned. "To the Warfront, something worth ...

i think it's a nice poem. i suggest fixing your spelling of ignorance and adding commas and colons, etc.