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But You Can't See In
Crituque what you can....poems are hard to critique, but easy to enjoy. any feedback wanted. needed. But You Can't See In White galaxies float to your face, their wings dissolve ...
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The Blinded
we are the blinded. but don't take it personally. please critique as harshly as you can: The Blinded Yesterady we celebrated A holiday Of killing The only people Who owned ...
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Ocean
Rip it apart with criticisims. if you can. poems are hard to critique. i want friends, so if you want to be my friend i will never reject a request. ...
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Children Who Love Light
First of all, i need this critiqued for my English class. Second of all, its framework is based off of the poem "Women Who Love Angels" by Judith Cofer. Thanks. ...
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Construction
Construction Last night I left for the countryside. I wanted to feel immortal in my solitude, away from the loud demands of society. In a field I lay breathing the ...