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THE ONLY THING IM GOING TO CRITICIZE IS THE WORD "HART" NEEDS TO SPELLED "HEART" BUT I LOVED YOUR POEM SO IN RESPONSE I WOULD GIVE U 2 STARS COULD ...

i agree with adrian u made it sound like you just thought it up and wrote it instead of letting in slowly turn into a poem but other than i ...

OH MY GOD !!!!!!! I have been reading all of the story from chapter one and I am in LOVE with it BUT........ She said he was her "boyfriend" sop ...

ok i have read both chapters of your story and i am in L>O>V>E with it !!!!!!!! There were a few speling errors but other than that i L>O>V>E it ...

QUOTE :I looked at me again, smiling. shouldn't that be HE looked at me again (this is the only typo i seen) awww i am speechless that was SUCH a ...

oh my god I LOVED IT i didn't get up to make my bed like i was told i couldn't stop reading this story but i agree with Sythe in ...

i have to agree with "summerless" you need to work on your story just a little bit i like the idea of the story but like "summerless" said you need ...

OH MY GOODNESS this is a good story is this to be the final chapter in the series I should seriously hope not to me this chapter was FAR less ...

ok i loved the series you are one of my FAVORITE writers on this site but of course i was one of the many if not few who basically harrassed ...

in my oopinion it was a well written a few typos here and there but what i am missing here is descriptions on the guy what did she see in ...

ok i LOVE your story you have a natural "talent " but please do a spell check you have a few typos i know how it is when someone tell ...

ok you know what i loved your poem this is the kind of poems i like to read are ALL about your feelings so if and when you post another ...

Even though i have read your "story" this poem makes it SOOO much more dramatic and it even makes me want to cry seriously i feel so bad for you ...