soccerstar17

Creepy, yet bueatiful and graceful! I enjoyed reading this, it gave me goosebumps. I hope to read more :)

I thought that this was a great poem!! You proved your point, it was simple, and very thoughtful. You could feel the emotions in it. Great job and keep writing!

Wow, just wow!! I loved this poem it gave me chills of emotion. It was romantic, bueatiful, and a little eerie. It was well written! Good job :)

I really liked this poem, but it made me sad. I think it was bueatiful and very touching that the girl died just to be with the love of her ...

thanks so much for all the advice, I will try to do better next time! :)