snickerdooly

I love it how it's so descriptive and it really draws you in! Good job!

ohhhh myyyyyy goddddddddd hurry write more and pm me when cause that was awesome!!!!!! :elephant:

write more! but what was chapter 2 part 1 about? why were all those letters there and why did she have a body guard? I need to KNOW!

If you want to read this I placed it into the romantic fiction the title is Hidden Heart sorry for the deleted

Hey I loved this piece! I like how she was calm and collected but you really really need to write more. Hope you decide you want to continue with this ...

Okay thanks! I really like your suggestions and I won't give up! By the way the paragraph that you fixed up was really good you must be an amazing writer... ...

And I know this was your first post and all so if you have any questions you can ask me even though I'm a newbie too I know how to ...

I love your story could you PM me when more are is posted much obliged. - Snickerdooly

I hate how he is using another girl who is innocent and frightened It's so Stupid!!!

I disagree with Layla I could read it tons of times. I loved the book! Read it last year, now that I'm thinking about it I'm going to read it ...

Hi! I loved it but it needs much description into the lives of the characters, but I think that the idea was marvelous and I believe you should write more! ...

Thanks guys. this is to captain classy, I never wrote the apple as being eaten I wrote it as like going through different stages. I'm re writing it so it ...

Thanks.

Thanks guys, really like your suggestions and this is to dreamy. Every time I read it I find something wrong, like a word is wrote wrong or weird punctuation but ...