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Edits in red, comments in blue :) I woke up sputtering and gasping in Dr. Richards’ house. Through the dim glow of the sun (I took out the word, from ...

I have read chapter one and now this and all I can tell you is I really enjoyed reading them, I like the idea of the victorian era but that ...

Wow I really liked this piece forgive me but at first I thought it was going to be cheesy but then I read it and it was amazing! The imagery ...

For as sure as the wind blows, Your lifetime has passed, As sure as the moon glows, Your memory will last. This stanza has good rhyming going and I like ...

I thought this poem flowed really well and the imagery and words that you gave to the readers was really great. I found no mistakes or problems that jumped out ...

Wow this was fricken awesome! (pun intended) It was insanely clever and at first I thought it would just have a stupid ending about how awesome he was but you ...

All comments are in blue and edits are in red. Rare flowers and warm scarves bec o me wilted (I think if you take out the word and it would ...

Amazing! Very entertaining, I loved how you cussed in it, it also helped people relate to Harry Potter more. Or at least it helped me relate to him more! Thanks ...

This piece was very unusual and I was (please forgive me) thinking that I would not like it but I actually believe it had a different sort of flow and ...

This piece was amazing and very insightful, I liked the new perspective you brought to the whole Harry Potter theme that has been seen since the final movie came out. ...

I thought this was truly beautiful and to me the perfect poem shows the pain and heartache of that person. I like how you wrote this and posted it on ...

I like this piece, and it flowed very well. But the only problem I had was the ending seemed not finished, that might just be me but I feel you ...

I’m up early, Way before school. To watch the sunrise. Don’t tell anybody. That ruins it. I like his part it's cute and creative :) The grumpy moonlight clouds, Shove ...

That's not me screaming in the night. I'm asleep, filtering dreams from reality Trying to find a way back to who I am— Darkness cannot hide me from myself. But ...

Astorial’s eyes lit up as if on fire. Something flashed in them, something that Anna couldn’t identify. With sudden brutality, he let out a howl before screaming, “Yes! Oh yes! ...