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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Everyone Judges Me Right

    This poem was really interesting it was one of those poem where you interpret what it means to you, or that's at least how I read it. I thought it ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: It's been a while since;

    So I really liked this, but there's a few quick things I'm gonna fix for you :) Comments in blue edits are in red. It's been a while since; You've ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Why am I?

    Wow, I really love this piece! The whole thing flowed very well and the rhyming was all really great, I liked how you wrote about two different people who were ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Malady

    I really did like this poem it had a good flow to it though the rhyming at times was a little rough, I liked how you transitioned into the poem. ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I Wanted to Change My Name

    I really liked this poem, it flowed very nicely and instead of one of those poem where it goes on and on this one was a perfect length. I liked ...

    Sep 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Moment of Flight

    Wow this was amazing it flowed really well and the rhyming was perfect. By perfect I mean that all the rhyming words fit in the context of the poem just ...

    Sep 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Lion

    Edits in red :) Though from far away your roar does sound, your terrors are so close at hand. Wherefore doth you slink to now? You r shadow plays upon ...

    Sep 2, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: My Name is L Phoenix Chapter 1

    I really enjoyed the first chapter of this novel, you hear the stories about people with cancer and their deaths and the saddness of it but I like how the ...

    Sep 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Baby Steps

    I really enjoyed this piece I thought it was sweet and sad at the same time. All my life I've stood still watching people walk past They had love to ...

    Aug 31, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Stranger (Chapters 7-9)

    I really love this novel, I'm hooked on reading it! I love the plot, and your writing made me fall in love with your characters and begin to love the ...

    Aug 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Let's Keep It A Secret.

    Leave me to bleed on my own; watch me as everything you've done becomes known. Revenge isn't as great as it seems; perhaps backstabbing would be a better scream. Maybe ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Love IV (Illumination)

    I loved this poem all the way through, from beginning to end without a moment of wavering. I loved the voice of the narrator and the idea of love that ...

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Bloody Knuckles

    I really like this piece, I thought it was a nice break form reading about stories where the guys are fighting. It's nice from a girls perspective :) The story ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Smiths

    So I don't have the ability to do a full on review since I'm writing this on my phone but I will try to give you my opinion and thoughts ...

    Aug 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: That Night

    Wow this was incredible, it literally has me in tears right now. What happened to the little five year old in this poem is so cruel and horrible. I hope ...

    Aug 16, 2011


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