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  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Muffins Make It Sound Complicated

    First off I want to say, wow. This is an amazing piece of work and I want to say congrats on finishing it. I would like to say that I ...

    Apr 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Seventh Crown I

    I like this piece of work and I honestly look forward to reading more. First off I like the way it is presented in older times and I honestly think ...

    Apr 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: It Kinda Smelled Like Funnel Cake

    I would like to say that this is a beautiful piece of work and i'm very proud that people can still make amazing works like this. I would honestly like ...

    Apr 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Memories or Nightmares?

    Hello I am snakeboy and I would like to review your work. I personally like the way it is presented as poetry. I also like the way you use the ...

    Apr 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Arts of Magic: Chapter One (Revised)

    Hello I really like the feel of this story and the fact that this seems to be going in the right direction with the magical element. Now onto the bad ...

    Apr 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Chaos Game, Chapters 1-3

    I really like this piece of work and I would honestly like to read the rest of the book but I see a few errors. I notice that when you ...

    Apr 25, 2016
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Crime of War

    the snake has arrived for a review. Now honestly very good presentation in the beginning were he asks, "names that;s all they are right?" now onto what I believe should ...

    Apr 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Supernatural Re: Oren ~One~

    First off I must say this is amazing. I feel like I'm reading a book and I honestly think that is an amazing step. Now one thing that throws me ...

    Apr 22, 2016


You walk into this room at your own risk, because it leads to the future, not a future that will be but one that might be. This is not a new world, it is simply an extension of what began in the old one. It has patterned itself after every dictator who has ever planted the ripping imprint of a boot on the pages of history since the beginning of time. It has refinements, technological advances, and a more sophisticated approach to the destruction of human freedom. But like every one of the super states that preceded it, it has one iron rule: logic is an enemy and truth is a menace.
— Rod Serling