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Re: Muffins Make It Sound Complicated
First off I want to say, wow. This is an amazing piece of work and I want to say congrats on finishing it. I would like to say that I ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Seventh Crown I
I like this piece of work and I honestly look forward to reading more. First off I like the way it is presented in older times and I honestly think ...
Apr 26, 2016 -
Re: It Kinda Smelled Like Funnel Cake
I would like to say that this is a beautiful piece of work and i'm very proud that people can still make amazing works like this. I would honestly like ...
Apr 26, 2016 -
Re: Memories or Nightmares?
Hello I am snakeboy and I would like to review your work. I personally like the way it is presented as poetry. I also like the way you use the ...
Apr 26, 2016 -
Re: Arts of Magic: Chapter One (Revised)
Hello I really like the feel of this story and the fact that this seems to be going in the right direction with the magical element. Now onto the bad ...
Apr 25, 2016 -
Re: The Chaos Game, Chapters 1-3
I really like this piece of work and I would honestly like to read the rest of the book but I see a few errors. I notice that when you ...
Apr 25, 2016 -
Re: Crime of War
the snake has arrived for a review. Now honestly very good presentation in the beginning were he asks, "names that;s all they are right?" now onto what I believe should ...
Apr 22, 2016 -
Re: Oren ~One~
First off I must say this is amazing. I feel like I'm reading a book and I honestly think that is an amazing step. Now one thing that throws me ...
Apr 22, 2016