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Help, you say? :twisted: Well, then, here goes ... First of all — the storm. We don't have the preceding passages, so I'm wondering; do you describe the storm before ...

Okay, your first paragraph: Vampire…that’s what he was…a bloody vampire, the leader of them all in fact. William Jade swirled the remains of blood in his glass and drank the ...

The idea behind this is (albeit kinda cliché) very sweet. You've chosen to write about some very squeamish topics and explore some very interesting themes. But I also think this ...

Okay, here goes! I'm sorry it took so long for me to get this together. I suck. :roll: I'm not going to critique the historical accuracy, because my knowledge of ...

Hee hee. I love you guys. À la Demons and Angels, I'm not going to crit this, but more or less ramble on and on about things that I thought ...

!!! You already know how much I freaking adore this, but when it's not 1:30(ish) in the morning, I'll try and write a coherently incoherent rambling review of why exactly ...

This book is so very overrated. Yes, it's a great story and a fun read. Yes, the fact verses fiction combined with a blending of various mythologies and philosophies and ...

...well, I ended up writing this critique sooner than I thought I would. Blame it on Snoink. ;) Speaking of which ... if our critiques overlap, it's because we were ...

Can someone please tell me what the Redwall series is about? Redwall is about a bunch of cute little animals who live in a monastary and like to eat lots ...

Okay, bear in mind that everything I have to say pertains to the first post. I haven't yet read anything past the original installment. ...right. On to the story. This ...

Oh, this is gorgeously written. There are a couple of grammatical errors (it's the commas; they're the kiss of death, or something close enough) and a few words/sentences that jar ...

First of all -- yay, Nanowrimo! (You beat me to posting my Nanowrimo story.) More people should do this. (Nanowrimo, that is, although more people should probably post their stories ...

Just to preface my obscenely long critique: this is a great story, with tons of potential, and you're an amazing writer. I'm not the best judge when it comes to ...

As an obsessive Neil Gaiman fan who has read every book he's read (not to mention a heck of a lot of his comics), Anansi Boys was definitely one of ...

I was going to write an obscenely long rambly thing about how amazing Sunshine is and how it's dark and funny and scary and smart at the same time, and ...