smanske15

I love this poem! Seriously, I think all of us here can relate to this poem on a spiritual level, defyingravity01. And I would just like to say that you ...

I really liked this poem! Just a few quick notes: I did notice only one major grammar error, and it was in line 22. Also, did you mean to capitalize ...

Lovely poem! I could feel the emotion from the very first line. Really, brilliantly written. I thought it was very creative and original, especially when you said "I live in ...

It's very, very wordy. Just after reading your first sentence I could tell that you like imagery, but try to keep it short and simple, or at least break it ...

Smanske15 here to review! First off, the technical errors: "Where is that knight, eh Star?" I would add another comma after "eh." "...out of here saddlebag..." You have an extra ...

My first impression of this story was this: What?? You have to remember that I have no knowledge of your story. Even after reading your entire prologue, still I have ...

HAHA. Nice. I don't really think that everyone would necessarily HATE you, maybe just frown upon you, but this was really funny. Only one technical error - - change the ...

Nice work! A few notes as I was reading, you can choose whether or not to make the changes.... I would remove the word "flourishing" in the sentence "I was ...

I like this poem very much. I love these lines especially: "I'd like to burn the sun just to prove I can." and say something cratered can be filled again." ...

Oh, this is so sad! One little change that I would make is to take out the "Although" in your last little piece there. I feel like there is a ...

Very ryhme-y. I don't usually review poetry, for it is an art and one that has differing view points, and should not be critisied (and I totally slaughtered that word, ...

Knight Malachi hit this one right on the nose. I suggest you fix these mistakes, but you have a great talent for story telling, that much I know to be ...

Sweet, dorky, honest. It's a very cute short story. I'm not entirely sure, and maybe you weren't either, about the detail you put into describing your sickness. I was lead ...

One word: Effortless. I love this story so much!! The dialogue was amazing and the amount of detail you portrayed made me feel as though I was really walking along ...

Couple of technical errors ([Take] is capitalized, [breathe] instead of breath, [;] randomly tossed in). But I like how you realize that you can change your destiny. I love this ...