smallestturtle

This is a great visual poem, but I feel like it would be better if you didn't squeeze it into a rhyme scheme. Stanzas three and four seem rougher than ...

I love how you took the idea of putting on a mask to hide and expanded it into several different ones for different circumstances. Breaking up the general mask that ...

It's an interesting poem to visualize! You don't say what exactly the frame the speaker leans against is, is it a doorframe? the canvas frame? That wouldn't be sturdy and ...

I can relate stanza four with someone who hurt me before too. The last lines of stanzas five and six are really interesting because it gives the insight that the ...