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Re: Pearls
Hey. :) Oh, what a beautiful poem. The style reminds me of Cummings (one of my favorite poets), the way your words are combinations of unexpected words. This whole poem ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Outlived
Hey. :) Let me set your mind at ease and say that you did very well on this haiku. You followed all the rules. You had five syllables on the ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: In the House with Chicken Feet (2)
Hello, GryphonFledgling. I'm sleepthief. I think we've met, in the virtual sense, of course. And I think that this wasn't reviewed for four days because it's just so dang perfect. ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: Dawn
Hi, futrauthr482! (Got a nickname? :) ) I'm sleepthief, and welcome to YWS! I'm fairly new myself. Um, I would love to review all of this, like, it would make ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: Unity
Hello, I'm sleepthief, and I'm fairly new so I'm still working out a reviewing system, but so far anything I add will be in bold and any comments I have ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: The Darkest Passion
Hi. :) I was drawn to this by the compelling title. I enjoyed reading this poem. The hardest battle to win are the ones , when you feel heartless towards ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Teenage Emergency
Wow. So I'm new, obviously, and this is my first attempt at a review. I've been skimming through the forums but I just had to stop to take a look ...
May 4, 2011
