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Ok so for the first sentence, I think you should change it to ""have always been my enemies". I loved the sentence that said "I think they secretly hope for ...

I liked this story very much. I accidentally hit submit but I am about to go write a review. You are a very good writer so keep writing :smt001

I like the idea of making this like a conversation only, so I'm assuming this is over text? I wish you would i like the little texting conversation in the ...

Thank you so much! This was very helpful but this is only the first 5 chapters to this story. I have a lot more, I just haven't posted them yet. ...

This is, by far, no doubt, the most beautiful piece of writing about love I have ever met. It is so... pure. It's so true and just pure. It's amazing ...

I wanted to make a small comment about the small blurb displayed, I thought it was very vague and it really caught my attention. "Looking at each other... I know ...

"It's textbook sensible. Clear. The forbearer of facts. But..." I think you should replace the periods with commas. It is grammatically better to do so because the single words do ...

I will definitely check that out and give you a follow :smt001

First of all, this story is really good. Second, all your commas should be inside the quotation marks when it applies. Also, you do not need commas after any of ...

First paragraph: you wrote her instead of here. I wanted to keep reading however when I read this. Also, all of your commas are outside of your quotation marks. Make ...

I opened this story with the intent of writing a review, and I almost couldn't find anything wrong with this. You are an absolutely amazing writer and this chapter to ...

I opened this story with the intent of writing a review, and I almost couldn't find anything wrong with this. You are an absolutely amazing writer and this chapter to ...

I opened this story with the intent of writing a review, and I almost couldn't find anything wrong with this. You are an absolutely amazing writer and this chapter to ...

I love this omg!!!!! The beginning gave me feels, the middle melted my heart, and the end turned it back in to a solid just to stomp on it and ...