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Thank you so much! As for what he's hiding, I feel like chapter one describes it. It's about his dad so if you want to check that out, it might ...

Thank you so much! This was extremely helpful and I do worry about putting too much detail in but I guess I shouldn't. Also, the end with the mask part ...

Thanks for the review! :smt001

Awww, thank you so so so much! Your posts like this just make my day.

Thank you so much! I can actually use this when editing this poem, as well as in the future. I would very much like to get better at writing poetry. ...

Thank you so much for this review! It was very helpful. I'm not a poetry writer at all so I will definitely try this. Thanks again

Thank you so much. I'll definitely try it out.

One of the main parts indeed is the relationship with his parents, yes. The coach is a man, and she didn't pick him up. His teammates did. I thought I ...

Thank you so much for the review! With the tenses, I have a lot of issues and I even read it through to make sure I didn't switch but I ...

Well don't get discouraged because someone doesn't like it. Not everyone will like your work but some will find the story intriguing. In my opinion you should keep it going ...

Thank you so much! This was actually extremely helpful. I will definitely make sure to answer those questions at some point. Thanks again :smt001

Seriously, thank you for all the reviews and all the advice in all the chapters. I can't believe you took the time to read through this story but it was ...

This review is also amazing!! I can't thank you enough for taking the time to read all of this, I know it's long. Thank you so much :smt001

Thank you so much! This review is amaing :smt001

I'm not here to review this because one, there isn't anything wrong, and two, I want to make a point, if this is all true. If it's not, feel free ...