skye12

You are not alone Crysi. I was 11 and in the sixth grade. I was also at school that day and I remember a student of another grade come in, ...

Nice. I'm not very good at analysing poems but this one is well-written. This is my favourite part in the poem, What do you hear With ears deafened- you’re dead ...

The story is great! I enjoyed it. When I was reading I was thinking it should obviously have hurt to have a heavy weight tugging at her hair. I smiled ...

It angers that humans can destroy such beautiful, splendid tranquility. All for what? So that they can congratulate themselves at being masters of the universe? This is an excellent poem. ...

You're right, not all songs should be happy ones. I felt what you were saying. I placed myself in a guy's perspective and imagined myself losing the girl I loved. ...

I'm no good at giving constructive criticism for I don't know what to say really, what can I say that might help you? I do have this to say though. ...

Wow. Incredible. Your poem is filled with emotion and your voice is heard. There is a sadness within the words. This girl is lost and cries out for help but ...

Yes I liked your poem :). I thought it was strange at first, but I kept on reading because I was curious. Your stanza's aren't the same in numbers, but ...