skorlir

Hmmm. I think "mauling" is rather strong imagery, and it somewhat detracts from the focus of the poem. And while calling it to attention that water and oil don't barter ...

This poem reminds me I should have followed you a while ago. Needless to say, good job.

Similar to the situation in my response to "The Root of Homophobia: The Bible," what follows here is not a review. I am stunned. I sit, working my jaw, wondering ...

I have constructed an image of myself, perhaps one shared by few others... that I am a harsh, objective reviewer. I am still an opinionated human being. But I believe ...

Thank you. But you flatter me. I doubt, if you appreciated this piece, that you couldn't "ma[k]e something like this" yourself. It would not be this piece, sure. But that ...

Goodness. I'm glad you... opposite of found it beautiful. It was inspired by the videogame "The Last of Us." It's a very graphic, no sugarcoatings game about the zombie apocalypse, ...

I should not have been so harsh. And I appreciate your being so gracious as to respond and clarify. Yes, there was excessive swearing. But I consider that the personality ...

I went to lengths to warn off anyone who might find the swearing distasteful. I similarly warned of its unsettling nature. I am sorry you did not enjoy the piece ...

Glad to know. It seems often that poems like this are written with specific intent.

Yes, Merry Christmas. :)

I shan't bother trying to review this - it's atomic. Miniscule and powerful. While Dancing Trees I could critique, I think this is everything it wasn't, and yet smaller still ...

It's about trees. It's about wind. It's about nothing, really. Perhaps that's the problem. It's a shame you didn't like it; I personally thought it quite nice. I don't mean ...

Looking back on this review is strange. "A winsome job." What a strange conclusion. It is, nonetheless, still an excellent poem. My critiques seem foisted; bearing on the ocean, ignoring ...

And don't be dismayed by my review! Foremost, in all of this: you have a story. Now you simply must improve it. I would love to work with you on ...

@carbonCore @ArcticMonkey You're both pretty. :P