skelbees

That's what I'm here for! I'm so excited to read the next chapter when I have the time. And I mean it when I say you're a great writer, your ...

Trying to write gay characters without becoming gay for your characters is a struggle I know all too well. Just gotta tough it out.

Ohhh I love it!!! The story is so immersive, I could feel my heart pounding right along with Em's! You've gotten right into the action, but it doesn't feel rushed ...

This is so good!!! Congrats on keeping the tenses right. Heaven knows I couldn't write in first-person present-tense. On to the next chapter! hecks yea

Thanks for the review! I actually wrote the later part of the chapter before the first, so I've been trying to find places where the phrasing is odd, or there ...

Oops, I meant her. I didn't know she was a girl.

Hmm, are you sure static is the word you're looking for? ;)

I was just on my way to do that ;)

Thank you for the review! I personally am going to keep the double question marks, at the risk of being unprofessional. I think it adds to the narrative voice, and ...

TYSM!!! Your review is really helpful, thank you for being so positive! Yes I meant to use the word static, one of the definitions is "unmoving or unchanging." It's usually ...

What can I say. I have a soft spot for ordinary characters in extraordinary situations. Also his name is Kale. I trust anyone named after a plant yo.

Mr. Nelly!! He's the most fascinating, and he talks intelligently without being pretentious. It's also so easy to fall into the "tall, dark, and handsome twenty-something white boy" protagonist trap, ...

Sorry, I don't know how to format reviews and to get the quote thing to work.