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Re: The Forest
Hello PeijiRestoration, I, for one, loved this poem. To me, it represents, going with the flow, and letting fate takes its course. {But every reader's view is different, so I ...
Jan 11, 2018 -
Re: A Day in the Life
Hello there, DarkPandemonium, I really liked your story. The plot was great- it was very suspenseful and I enjoyed the dialogue very much. I especially enjoyed the character of Anita. ...
Jan 11, 2018 -
Re: They're Virtually Mistakes
Hello SongbirdFatale, I thought you did a great job on this work. It was very suspenseful, and it sucked me in until the very end. However, you need a bit ...
Jan 8, 2018 -
Re: Scream and Cry and Calm
Overall, I think you did a very good job. Your poem hit me on a personal note, for I sometimes feel that I have no one in my life to ...
Dec 12, 2017 -
Re: I Can't Write Poetry
DragonWriter22, You are SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO wrong. That is one of the greatest poems I have ever read. It is so much better than I could do. You have so many rhymes ...
Feb 10, 2017