sinistercutlass

I'd 'like' this post multiple times if I could. I love that you're loving this story and getting out it what I want the audience to get out of it! ...

I'm so pleased by your perceptions of Kathryn's maturation, as well as a bit of backsliding on her part! That's exactly what I was trying to portray!

I appreciate your review, BlueAfrica, and I'm pleased by the comparison to "Pride and Prejudice". I do want to let you know that there is a chapter before this one, ...

Oh, I thought you had already realized... yes, of course, I was a member of the Mormon church, for the first 15 years of my life. :) I'm so glad ...

I'm glad to finally reach a fellow ExMo :)

Thanks. :)

Thanks :) Thoughts on the characters? Any predictions? ;) Might you have suggestions on how to improve the narrative? Was it somewhat overwritten and could be tightened to improve the ...

I'm glad you feel I spoke for you. I was hoping the poem would be relate-able. I'm glad you like the title. I myself didn't think it was that special, ...

Oooh, like John Keats? I haven't read anything by him (I'm not usually a poetry reader... or writer), but I sense that I should feel flattered ;)

Thanks. That seems like a good correction to make.

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Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for your kind words :) Stay tuned for two more chapters :)

Thanks for the clarification, especially your comments on the dinosaur poem - that makes a lot of sense! May I suggest one thing? Describe the air as "from" the nostrils ...

OK - alright.

Thanks!