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Re: My Willow Tree
I love the classic rhyme scheme of this. It made the poem flow a lot smoother than a poem without a rhyme scheme. You made me feel like MY constant ...
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: Deal of a Lifetime
The imagery in this is sooo lovely. I could really get a sense of her fear, and the scenery. I definitely want to read more of this. No no, I ...
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: The Case Of The Sleepy Town Named Death [Ch.1]
I think I would definitely be interested in reading more of this story. The dialogue was a little hard to pick apart and figure out who was talking to who. ...
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: don't break hearts, break minds
Holy, wow. This really caught my attention. The line that said "whether thats in poetry or in love, i dont know" is so true. You can really tell that you ...
Mar 30, 2015
