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silverfin713

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Immerse.

    You've probably heard it too many times, but I'm sorry about your friend. This poem reflects how beautiful she must have been. I love the images you create in my ...

    Jun 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: will you please come home?

    Hello, This poem was very emotional and I like how you just come out with a topic like this, not covering it up with uneeded details or descriptions. It's sharp, ...

    Jun 4, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: A Hopeful Window

    This is a very interesting poem. I went from happy to sad, happy to sad while reading it, which was a cool effect, since most poems stay sad most of ...

    Jun 4, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: unfolded

    Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. This is an incredible piece of work! It shows such a depth of emotion. I can pratically feel what your narrator is feeling. Some lines sent ...

    Jun 4, 2012


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