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Re: Immerse.
You've probably heard it too many times, but I'm sorry about your friend. This poem reflects how beautiful she must have been. I love the images you create in my ...
Jun 5, 2012 -
Re: will you please come home?
Hello, This poem was very emotional and I like how you just come out with a topic like this, not covering it up with uneeded details or descriptions. It's sharp, ...
Jun 4, 2012 -
Re: A Hopeful Window
This is a very interesting poem. I went from happy to sad, happy to sad while reading it, which was a cool effect, since most poems stay sad most of ...
Jun 4, 2012 -
Re: unfolded
Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. This is an incredible piece of work! It shows such a depth of emotion. I can pratically feel what your narrator is feeling. Some lines sent ...
Jun 4, 2012
