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Re: Untitled- Prologue and Chapter 1
Howdy! I'm going to review your work! :) Okay so the first thing I notice is that it is extremely short! Whilst it's too the point it just feels like ...
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Re: Just Another Girl-Chapter 1
Howdy! I'm going to review your work! :) From looking at it I notice two things: 1) It is very short, if all your 'chapters' are this short then perhaps ...
Feb 23, 2013 -
Re: James Volt, Chapter 1.
Howdy! I'm going to review your work! :) An average day for James Volt would consist of drawing, writing, studying, being alone in his room, and thinking about, well, what ...
Feb 23, 2013 -
Re: *Untitled* First Chapter
Howdy! I'm going to review this for you! Each reflecting off eachother in the morning sunlight, Each other is two words not one. "Hey, Bob," I shouted There needs to ...
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Re: Dear Future Daughter
Howdy! I'm going to review this! Firstly I'm just going to say that you need to sort out the paragraphing. This is a letter to your future daughter yet it ...
Feb 23, 2013 -
Re: Essay the First
Howdy! I'm going to review your work. :) I developed a passion for reading and writing in English at an early age, despite having grown up surrounded by people who ...
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Re: Wasteland
Howdy! I'm going to review this. :) I have not spoken with you in a while. This doesn't make sense. To make it make sense you need to have 'to' ...
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Re: Captive Refrain
Howdy! I'm going to attempt to review for you! but if anyone asks, tell them we're fine." If you're quoting something you need to firstly have opening quotation marks. Secondly ...
Feb 23, 2013 -
Re: Thoughts on Teen Writing Websites
Interesting rant, I take a different view point to you on this. For the purpose of my argument I feel the need to make it clear that I am not ...
Feb 23, 2013