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lets say if i changed the title to the beach ? like i origionally had it...then it'd be a bit harder lol...

thanks aqua...because i never say that they are waves and i never give a scene .. i figured i'd keep going with the beach.. to make sure its there as ...

heya I loveed it, inspired by me? cool thankyou silented 1, yours is very good. :) well done! it is I who must thank you... your poem will always be ...

haha sorry man... the uncertanity thing.. should be casually.. haha i guess i forgot to change it lol

i'm quite sorry for asking.. but may i have some more reviews ?

also i forgot to say that this inspried me too...thank you..its a rather good poem .. to get one thinking on a subject matter of which to write on .. ...

thanks era and enlightened...your reviews are much welcomed =]

thank you blu .....

may i ask for some more reviews / comments ?

haha thank you aqua and flower...

i found typos.. and things like that.. perhaps this person is your self ? not a person you'll actully meet... a being thats within you i suppose....that can keep you ...

hehe...thank you.... this poem would go good with my other poem the forest's bed.. thats in my yws blog.... they are kinda the same thing... except this focuses more on ...

haha thank you.. the dots are my habit of pausing while i talk... and i write how i talk.. mispronounced = you can see i use these dots a lot...its ...

thanks AquaMarine27, FantasyWriter25 and springrain.. i don't know....what to really say... lol...sorry...

like if you saw this as conversation between 2 people.. like me saying all this to you...and then leaving when I'm done... this could sound better written in a different ...