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I like it because it gives the reader a mix emotion the only word that threw me off a little was crooked, (might just be me). I like the poem ...

I actually never plan for any of my things to rhyme at all if they do its by complete coincidence. ^^"

Thanks for the help i wrote it on a IPad in AP Chemistry class so my grammar was terrible when writing it because i hate typing on those keyboards

I'll change it for you then. I did this when I was half asleep so I didn't care for grammar.

Thanks for the reply ive never been very good with grammer and some of my writings I just write more as a depressed expression rather than the theology but I ...

I kinda said it like becasue even when ur with someone forever they may stray or u have to ask them to be with u if they waver back