shieldmaiden

Thanks so much! I'm glad that it's not boring yet. I hope to have the next one posted sometime this week. You are really helping me and pushing me to ...

Nooooo!!! Why did she walk away???? Why are you doing this to me!? Please post the next one soon!

Thanks Lady Mysterio for your review and kind words. Thanks also for pointing out the use of commas and capitals after someone speaks. I'm also at odds with that, and ...

Yep, you did a great job!:)

All true - by the way - I love your profile pic!!!

Thanks for the great review!!! It was very helpful. Yes, there was that one sentence that I never finished. I decided to delete it and forgot all about it ... ...

Thanks!!!

Thanks so much Phoenix!!! I'm glad you think this was well done. And thanks for catching those errors. They completely escaped my attention. I hope to have the next chapter ...

Oh boy ... ooops! Poor little girl!!!

Typical misunderstanding. This is really refreshing from a kindergartener's point of view. At least they have an excuse, being so young. It always drove me nuts when highschooler's behaved like ...

Thank you so much Liberty! Really enjoyed reading your review and your helpful tips. I should really have developed the supernatural side more. It would have given more depth to ...

Thank you so much Liberty! Really enjoyed reading your review and your helpful tips. I should really have developed the supernatural side more. It would have given more depth to ...

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. U give such great insights and that's exactly why I tagged you. Thanks for pointing out those errors. The reason why Julia knew ...

Thanks for the helpful tips. Really gave me ideas on how to improve. :)

Thanks!