shieldmaiden

Thanks for pointing out the repetition I had made. I totally agree with you and also strive to find different synonyms. This one must have escaped my attention. Thanks for ...

Your review was very helpful and encouraging! Thank you! :)

Thanks Drak for taking the time to read this chapter. I'm glad it has you intrigued and I hope the rest doesn't disappoint. Just fair first chapters are very choppy ...

Hey Phoenix! So glad to see you. I'm glad you got a chance to review this chapter. I appreciate all the time you take on reviewing my work. It must ...

Thanks for the tip of inventing. Truly helpful. Question tho, is it really important? Some books I've read didn't bother with it. I'd love to hear what you think.

Thanks for the review. It means a lot that I was able to engage your senses, since description has never been my forte. So, thanks :) You made my day!

I will be doing that :)

I will be doing that :)

Hey Phoenix!!! No worries about not reviewing. I've been out of it for a long long time and haven't even been on for a while. But I'm still writing, although ...

Aww, thank you for your kind words and I'm glad that you found it interesting. It means a lot to me and you just made my day. Thanks!

Great suggestion!!!! And yes, sweating under water...a bit of a problem figuring that one out. :) I dont think I should switch POV though. But I'll find a way to ...

Thanks so much. Glad you liked it :)

Very helpful :)

Thanks so much for your review. I'm glad you liked it and found it worthwhile to point out the things I can improve on. It means a lot to me. ...

Thanks for the good advice. I felt withdrawn when writing this and it was a struggle to finish. But, I look forward to fixing it later. There is a lot ...