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Thanks Honora! Incredibly helpful. I guess that the reason why I didn't go into too much description about how she was feeling is because I'm not entirely sure myself. Kkachi ...

Thanks for mentioning Iyagi's family. Nearly forgot all about them. U are a fantastic help!

Thanks Phoenix! I hope to have the next chapter out before the week is through. Thanks for all the encouragement!!! Really keeps me going. U the Best!

Very deep and quite true. War just brings disturbance and chaos. At times it is a necessary evil - but still remains evil. So many lives lost, so many families ...

Oops, so sorry! My phone wasn't responding so I kept hitting post.

Thanks Awru! I'm glad you liked it. Nakai and Iyagi's conversation was awkward, but I think that they know each other really well and, I'm not sure yet, but it's ...

Thanks Awru! I'm glad you liked it. Nakai and Iyagi's conversation was awkward, but I think that they know each other really well and, I'm not sure yet, but it's ...

Thanks Awru! I'm glad you liked it. Nakai and Iyagi's conversation was awkward, but I think that they know each other really well and, I'm not sure yet, but it's ...

Thanks as always Phoenix! So encouraging and comforting for you to say all those wonderful things. To be honest, I'm not quite sure how the General will react either. The ...

Yep, my bad :)

Thanks so much for the review. I'm impressed that you even remember who Leomong is. I only mentioned once or twice! And yes,I miss Kkachi's men as well. Hopefully they ...

Nope, it's Pulsa's dead mother. Those other things are called the Incarcerates

Hey Phoenix! Thanks for such an awesomely encouraging review. You described Kkachi's and Iyagi's characters and personality perfectly! It fills me with relief when someone else understands and gets my

Hey Phoenix! Thanks for such an awesomely encouraging review. You described Kkachi's and Iyagi's characters and personality perfectly! It fills me with relief when someone else understands and gets my

Really sad. This short piece packs a powerful punch. It's one of the things I really love about poetry. A person can say so many things with only a few ...