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Thanks for the review! I'll post "chapter" two tomorrow and slowly as the prints build up more info will fall into place. And yes, it is a Canadian town. I'll ...

That typo ruined my comment on typos ruining things.

Wow, thay typo just ruined my evil laugh.

Maybe they aren't alive. Maybe they never were. Who knows? Maybe they weren't ever alive. MUAHAHAHAGA

Also, I hope I didn't sound disrespectful... I just was explaining some of my choices...

Often with newspapers, they have things called cover stories which are often continued throughout the print. Rather than a present tense update, it is just a continuation. Also, you mentioned ...

Thanks for the review! I have a quick question... Where in it does it say an update on the man... I forgot.

Wow. Literary spotlight. I cannot describe how happy I am. Thank you, everyone who liked it!

Haha, yeah, I love Russian accents too!

I'm sad, but that makes sense. I still don't know why I automatically double post, so sorry about that.

Hey, Tsunami! Sheyren here finally reviewing the next chapter. Overall, I loved it. I can really tell you're taking inspiration from Wings of Fire but this story is so unique ...

Women don't matter anyway. It's not like we babies or anything.

I don't have enough words to describe what I went through reading this. This is a an emotional way of telling a not so beautiful story. I am truly sorry ...

It has been liked!