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Thank you, GrapeNerd! I've noted your suggestions regarding using commas and semi-colons and will try and implement.

Thank you, MialyNire! I'm encouraged that you did feel like you had time-travelled despite not being from India. That's a great compliment indeed!

Thank you, Costa! Yes, these are my own recollections. I'll be careful regarding using hyphenation and exclamation marks. Regarding too many paragraphs, I want what I write to feel like ...

Thank you, Belladona! I have taken note of points for improvement. I'll try to be more appropriate in using hyphenation and exclamation marks.

Recklessandwild, no offence meant! No, I haven't heard of 'This I Believe' stories. Forgive me! I live in the back of the boondocks, and creep out of the woodwork now ...

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Although this is termed a narrative, it reads more like a charter of beliefs in some constitutional document. There isn't a storyline to speak of except that you went through ...

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A short-story that ended too quickly! A story that led me to ask for a more that wasn't there! Perhaps, he needs to reopen the case! Or has he given ...

Thank you!

Kaju, thanks for that very helpful and positive review! I've noted your valuable suggestions. The one about expressing numerals as words is especially important. I've published my next work 'Monsoon's

kushakJ, thank you!

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