shannonlyons

I really liked this! It truly depicts the character of today's generation, and while it seems wrong to stereotype all young people as immoral and immature, I can't say I ...

This is an awesome piece of writing and very symbolic. I have to be honest, I was slighltly confused how the cleanliness of our hands (which I know is stated ...

Wow! This was a really beautiful piece of writing and I envy your idea of describing the in between moments. This poem perfectly depicts how society can busy themselves so ...

Hi! This was a great poem and very unique. It is dark yet charming- not disturbing like much dark writing but instead almost enlightening. Through a simple poem, you gave ...

I really liked this. Dreams are always an interesting subject for writers for they're so generally shared, but so different for each individual. I liked the way your portrayed dreams ...

I like this poem. It is not deep and symbolic, but highly relateable. I have a younger sibling who also faces anxiety before that first week of school. Who dosent? ...

Wow! This was extremley well written and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I am suprised to hear you are new to short stories because this flowed the way an experienced ...

Hi samrockz, I'd like to start by saying I think choosing 'loneliness' as the subject of your poem was a great idea. Often times, writers base their poem on ideas ...