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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Unfavorable

    Hello, shaniac here to review this piece! From the beginning of this chapter, I can already tell that this character-Alora-misses her brother deeply after he was forced to leave. It ...

    Jun 3, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Silver blade

    Shaniac here to review this short story! With short stories I've read, they are a bit longer than this one. This paragraph almost feels like a quick summary of what ...

    Jun 2, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: 21st of April

    Hello, Shaniac here to review this piece! I really like the descriptions that you have in places in this poem. It kind of brings me back to my childhood where ...

    Jun 1, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Jealousy

    Shaniac here to review this poem! I've read a few poems about jealousy and this one is in the same vein as most since most poets relate jealousy as a ...

    May 19, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Spring Storm

    Shaniac here to review this poem! Right off the bat, just through one quick read, there is a lot of descriptions happening. Imagery is pouring out of the words and ...

    May 19, 2018
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: Labyrinthitis

    Shaniac here to review this poem! What a wonderful poem with a lot of good and different things happening. A key thing I'd like to point out is the different ...

    May 16, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: I am

    Shaniac here to review your piece! Right off the bat, I love the beginning to this. Not only does it give us a bit of suspense and kind of leading ...

    May 14, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Music

    Shaniac here to review this! This is my first ever review on this site, so forgive me if I get anything wrong. I love the Greatest Showman. It's probably one ...

    May 14, 2018


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