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shagy91

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: His and Hers

    A very nice piece nonetheless, expresses true feelings and a picture of pairing with him and singularity as a paradox. "seldom is it this cheap" ... May i suggest a ...

    Jul 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: When needs change

    Nice writing Samee7a, I really like the way you approach the imagery in the poem. Sounds deep with many meanings, but i think there is a mistake... if I'm not ...

    Jul 21, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Miserably alive

    Great story, very nice and more advanced than the old ones. The story can be understood literally and figuratively. I felt something missing in the story, but maybe that feeling ...

    Jul 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: So they said

    Great structure and rhythm. The simplicity of it gives its value, the more the words are honest the more the beauty of the work. Few mistakes nonetheless but still a ...

    Jul 21, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Crows

    I think of it as a story for a horror movie, but a funny one. The idea of being fired from her job with all that love from her and ...

    Jul 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: For death begins at life's first breath, while life begins a

    I totally agree with Anas, it's hard to see that as giving birth. The only word that is related to the topic is death! Words are strangely put away from ...

    Jul 20, 2011


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