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Re: Has Been Deleted
Ok first I would like to say a state of mind helps in poetry and you have that so the poem was excellent decribe in great detail and you can ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Open Sea
I really like this peice because short and decent and honestly everybody must have passion in their poetry. Because without passion their is no story or feeling but in this ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Redemption
Well first of all wow this poem you can feel the passion as if you spilled out your heart. This poem is excellent because of the message,I really enjoyed reading ...
May 12, 2011 -
Re: Personal Portal to Paradise
I really like this poem it has a good rythem I like how its simple and it rhymes plus good use of grammer. I also really like the magic feeling ...
May 12, 2011 -
Re: On the other side of the world
Wow, I really enjoyed reading this poem! You can feel the emotion and the passion, I can tell you put your heart and soul into this poem, that what real ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: Sisters Never Lie
yo depressing poem im sorry about that i understand though my aunt karon died of brest cancer in 2007 just keep up writing do what ever u can keep hope ...
Apr 21, 2011
