servant4christ

Very well written...I feel alot of thought and emotion behind this poem...I know poems don't have to rhyme or have a rhythm but I rather like it when they do...but ...

I am enjoying this immensly! More please!!!

don't leave me hanging here!

Oooooo please keep writing this! I am impressed! This was one of the best things I have read all day!

Oooooo I love all the description! And the first sentence had me hooked! Keep writing!

Another exciting installment! I am thrilled at how this story is turning out. Well done!

Thanks to all who have commented! I will take your advice and I REALLY appreciate the compliments! Thanks for making my first attempt at writing a story in two months ...

AHHHH!!!!! Wait! WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!! I think she should "break up with him" Or something else dramatic but please, end the chapter there! Add to the suspense, make this a page ...

Alright I changed the bothersome font heh was pretty annoying wasn't it :)

Thank you for your help! I edited it and made a few changes. I'm not completely done but hopefully it is readable now. Part 4 is coming soon...I hope

I did some editing to my story. I'm not sure about the spelling of secrete but I'm going to leave it the way it is for now because according to ...

Very beautiful, and I think you mean it too :)

I definately find this VERY intriging! You have my full attention. Please keep writing this!

I wrote this a long time ago...the first paragraph is kinda confusing but the rest of it is better....hope everyone enjoys!

Pretty interesting! You have my attention...continue writing this! Develop your characters a little more and we might have a winner :)