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Actions Speak Louder

  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: Voices From the Void

    Thank you for your kind words!

    Jun 8, 2018
  • Short Story » General, Humor Re: Montezuma's Revenge

    I'm not entirely sure why you wrote this...um...segment...but I laughed anyways. Clever if not meant to be for the ridiculous. If you expound upon this piece, I wouldn't call it ...

    Nov 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Narrative Re: Kyōkan

    Thank you for your review! You are very encouraging ^_^ I am glad you liked the characters! I would certainly like to review anything of yours if you would like ...

    Nov 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Hope Against All Reason

    Wow...this was true and sweet and real. I loved the father's analogy for the girl. The father is a truely lovable character. The separate voices were also very well displayed. ...

    Feb 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Actions Speak Louder

    I am very glad that my story caught your interest! I am in the process of writing the next chapter so if you would be interested in reading more I ...

    Feb 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Actions Speak Louder

    Thank you so much for your review! It was very uplifting and helpful! :) I'm glad you liked the story so far. It is a chapter of a novel I ...

    Feb 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Anarchy

    Thank you :)

    Aug 30, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Anarchy

    Thank you for your review! I explained why I wrote it this way in another comment. Don't worry I will change it.

    Aug 30, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Anarchy

    Haha yeah, I explained in the other comments why I did that. But thank you so much for your review!

    Aug 30, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Anarchy

    I have read the inheritance cycle :) It was a good series. I do see what you mean, but as I just mentioned in another reply, I did use to ...

    Aug 30, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Stop and Stare (Part 1)

    I LOVE THIS!!!! So blunt, so honest, so real!!! I have to say I admire your writing. The characters are soooo believable, the dialogue is impecible, and the story is ...

    Jul 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: What is

    I like the blunt truth in this poem :) thought provoking! Keep up the good work!!!

    Jul 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Love and Other Stupid Emotions<3

    I actually almost started joke...I just read a story about someone dying and I think you captured the emotion very well...I look forward to see how this story progresses. Post ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Remembering Emily

    I fixed all the errors thank you guys so much for your reviews! They've been very encouraging. Considering I haven't written anything in like 4 months...

    Jun 6, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Pregnant at 16

    Oooo intriguing! Keep writing please!!!! I want to know how the party goes...details please! (pretend your readers are gossip queens who want to be informed!!!)

    Jun 6, 2011


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