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Re: Like A Paper
Hey thank you again for the generous review ! :) I'll make the changes soon. *Thumbs Up*
Sep 9, 2016 -
Re: Like A Paper
@Mage Thanks a ton for the review, I will soon make the changes, and try to improve the flow :) Your review helped a lot.
Sep 9, 2016 - Re: Eight Hours Sep 8, 2016
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Re: (Insert Name Here)
Hey:) I liked this vey much, the storyline and everything, but what I felt is that there was just a little dragging in the beginning. And... I donno, can a ...
Sep 1, 2016 -
Re: My Broken Boy
Oh dear ! Thanks for the sweet review, well amok... Umm amok means.... Out of control, especially when armed and dangerous, and resuscitate means to bring back life... I know ...
Sep 1, 2016 -
Re: Ghost
Thanks buddie ! I'll try to rewrite it, it's only that I'm unable to spare time... my bad !
Aug 30, 2016 -
Re: Ghost
OmG! I understand what you're saying, i really tried to avoid all that rhyming, cause I know it sounds kiddish, I tried to write in free verse but it went ...
Aug 30, 2016 -
Re: Symphonies
If you really have a guy like him! Dayuuum you're lucky :)
Aug 29, 2016 -
Re: My Broken Boy
Thank you so much , I'm glad somebody understood what it really feels like... :)
Aug 29, 2016 -
Re: My Broken Boy
Thank You :)
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: My Broken Boy
Thanks a ton. It's actually kinda embarrassing. Haha. I'm not used to so much flattery... :p
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: My Broken Boy
Thank You for the review :)
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Going Into The Woods
I didn't mean to be mean or anything.. but haha... maybe you would want to make changes..now :)
Aug 27, 2016 -
Re: My Broken Boy
Umm amok means.... Out of control, especially when armed and dangerous. Thank you so much for the review and the encouragement :* It means a lot to me :)
Aug 27, 2016 -
Re: The "Butterfly Effect"
aww... that's a bit shocking ! I was pretty sure you were Muslim because of your name. :) I have my exams going on, andddd bruuhhhh !! It's terrible. YWS ...
Aug 16, 2016
