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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Like A Paper

    Hey thank you again for the generous review ! :) I'll make the changes soon. *Thumbs Up*

    Sep 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Like A Paper

    @Mage Thanks a ton for the review, I will soon make the changes, and try to improve the flow :) Your review helped a lot.

    Sep 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Eight Hours

    Sep 8, 2016
  • Short Story » Lyrical, General Re: (Insert Name Here)

    Hey:) I liked this vey much, the storyline and everything, but what I felt is that there was just a little dragging in the beginning. And... I donno, can a ...

    Sep 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: My Broken Boy

    Oh dear ! Thanks for the sweet review, well amok... Umm amok means.... Out of control, especially when armed and dangerous, and resuscitate means to bring back life... I know ...

    Sep 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Romantic Re: Ghost

    Thanks buddie ! I'll try to rewrite it, it's only that I'm unable to spare time... my bad !

    Aug 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Romantic Re: Ghost

    OmG! I understand what you're saying, i really tried to avoid all that rhyming, cause I know it sounds kiddish, I tried to write in free verse but it went ...

    Aug 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Symphonies

    If you really have a guy like him! Dayuuum you're lucky :)

    Aug 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: My Broken Boy

    Thank you so much , I'm glad somebody understood what it really feels like... :)

    Aug 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: My Broken Boy

    Thank You :)

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: My Broken Boy

    Thanks a ton. It's actually kinda embarrassing. Haha. I'm not used to so much flattery... :p

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: My Broken Boy

    Thank You for the review :)

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Going Into The Woods

    I didn't mean to be mean or anything.. but haha... maybe you would want to make changes..now :)

    Aug 27, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: My Broken Boy

    Umm amok means.... Out of control, especially when armed and dangerous. Thank you so much for the review and the encouragement :* It means a lot to me :)

    Aug 27, 2016
  • Poetry » Science, Realistic Re: The "Butterfly Effect"

    aww... that's a bit shocking ! I was pretty sure you were Muslim because of your name. :) I have my exams going on, andddd bruuhhhh !! It's terrible. YWS ...

    Aug 16, 2016


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