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Hi :) This was a really interesting idea, Kat. I think it would make more sense/look better if every poem title was in italics, or a different type of font ...

Hi Idraax, here to review as requested :D I'm sun burnt and tired, but it was a great day :3 Onto the review. Other scenes of mine, that don't relate ...

Hiya Skins! Here to review :3 In case anyone was wondering, Aeron is pronounced like A-ron. It's a Welsh thing... Just go with it... Aaron is a strange name for ...

Hiya Quibbler :) I'm Jai. First off, perhaps placing your Author's Note in a spoiler would be a good idea. Certainly not necessary, but it detracts less from the story ...

Hi :) I'm Jai, and I'll be reviewing your work today. First, I think you mean "Death's Shadow" to be your title. Secondly, I would hear the ryhming in the ...

Hey :) It's 3:41am here in Australia, so if this review isn't coherent, I apologize :3 First, I'm not entirely sure what this poem was supposed to be about. It ...

Hi. First, I am going to review this because of one thing. [√-1

Hey Grizzy! Welcome to YWS. I loved the premise of this story. Just quickly, here's a few things to note. Generally author's put their notes in italics, or in a ...

Hey IG, I'm Jai. So, first off I'll tell you this quickly, though you don't need to listen to me. But I've been on YWS a long time, and this ...

Wai herro thar, Shear :3 “Like he always sits next to the window like a freaking ghost and never says anything.” lolwut? Do you mean, "he always sits next to ...

Hey Shear :3 Finally here to review. Stab me for my lateness :D I grabbed it and vigorously brushed my teeth, glaring at my mirror image. Without toothpaste? Ewww :P ...

Hey Skins :) Just a few things I noticed: Ollie reached into the bag again and pulled out three large cans of cider. “If you’re really good, you can get ...

Heya Maddy! Jai here again, reviewing for 1/4th of the Four Musketeers! Today… May 3rd It might be beneficial to include a year stamp as well, to make the "eight ...

Hey Maddy! Thanks for asking for four reviews from the Four Musketeers! I'm Jai, and I'll be your first reviewers. *sigh* about the other reviewers, you might be waiting a ...

Hey Skins! There should be an electric prodder to stab people over the internet - that would get my attention :P Here to review finally . I owe you some ...