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Hi Flower, here to review as requested from the Dynamic Duo! ^^ An Algebra II test was the only thing on the mind of Johnny Brankton. This test would define ...

Hi, I'm Jai. A long time ago, you requested a review from my WRFF thread, and I sincerely apologise for the wait. I've been busy in real life, and assignments ...

Hi Meg :D Just thought I should let you know that I'm completely up to date with your novel now, as I've read it all and it's brilliant. There were ...

Hi Meg, Jai here :) They ignoried the waifs that begged for gold coins and spat at the peasants who came to stare. One man leaned over to his comrade ...

Hi Meg, Jai here. Extremely sorry about the wait, but (I don't know if I've already told you) I just started university again a few weeks ago, and I'm starting ...

I know I've jumped on the bandwagon a little late (since this was posted last year, haha) but let me tell you my initial thoughts: 1) omg. Wtf is this. ...

Hi :) One half of the Dynamic Duo here. Sorry about the delay! Your chapter just intimidated me so much that I flitted around cleaning the house to avoid doing ...

:P I thought the opposite to Skins, in a way. Instead of finding the playful bantering realistic, I found it childish and a bit silly. "It's nothing," she said. "No ...

The first chapter pales in comparison to this. The only thing I can think of is deleting the first chapter and rewrite it from scratch. You've matured so much as ...

Awesome. Two things though: 1) What are the chances that she would run into her brother of all people at this random area? He wasn't heading home, was he? It's ...

Definitely like Zoey's side of the story way more than Charlie's. It's almost as if you've spent more time with Zoey's part, giving her more character and far more description ...

Finally here to review, Skins, haha. I'm so lazy. On to the review. It rained that night. I was strumming my guitar, playing whatever crap came into my head as ...

!!! You. Are. Fantastic. It's not every day that I log into YWS and find that a writer has genuinely followed my advice and completely overhauled (almost) their story based ...

Heya Sylvester, thanks for the request :) Sorry I didn't get on to this sooner, but uni homework beckoned quite evilly. Sooo, here I am to review one behalf of ...

Hi :) Thanks for requesting a review from the Dynamic Duo! Sorry I didn't do this as soon as I received notification, but I had university classes all day today. ...