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Okay...its been awhile since I've posted anything on this book...please no rude critiques...(is that spelt right) I don't want harsh comments, there is no reason to say hurtful things to ...

I am stunned. Initially I didn't like the style of the first part in Taylor's point of view - she was too teenagery, she was so ordinary, everything about her ...

Hey Squidikle :D Hopefully, the rhyming doesn't sound too forced. It does a bit, but that can't be helped, considering the fact that you wrote this to rhyme. Footsteps in ...

Hey Princess, here to review :D First, it does remind me of the Toy Story franchise, and that's a tad unfortunate considering that the newest instalment of that series only ...

I have to say, what a fantastic story. It's full of emotion, typos, spelling mistakes and grammar errors, but it's absolutely compelling and held me interested the whole way through. ...

this is a idea that sprung from Meh head when i was pondering my story, i know it isn't very good, but that's what your for isn't it, to give ...

Hey Rachael :) Glad to see something of yours up! :D She liked the way the T-shirt hung from his shoulders . It was blue like water , and like ...

Hey Lethero :) Here to review. *This all I got so far, but I just took some medicine and am too tired to continue. I'll get more up soon.* First ...

Hey BlackBird, dropping by to review. Repetition, if there is any, in green. She stared above at the slow revolving slice of the ceiling fan, imagined her throat bared to ...

Hey Dawn :) Repetition in green, if there is any, comments in bold. I've noticed that you haven't spaced out your story for the sake of the readers on YWS, ...

Hey :) First off, maybe you should take your story out of the quote formatting, and put your Author's Note as a quote, or even hide it with a spoiler ...

Here to critique, little sister *awesome face* I’m trying to break free, (A poor sparrow, me, wishes to burst into the sky) Of this mould which tries to shape me, ...

Returning your *awesome* favour with my own review :) Peace, peace, I scolded myself. Should what the Main Character be thinking be in italics? Losing wasn’t an option, either. My ...

Hey Bick :) I will return reviews for this. You don't have to, but if you did want to spend some time on this battle scene I wrote, then that ...

Hey Girl :) Just read over it again. I'm glad you took in my suggestions. I found one thing that didn't sound right, Sam was mad, I knew because his ...