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Hi there! I saw this chapter in the Green Room so thought I'd stop by. You seem to be an established author and reviewer and your writing style for your ...

Heya! :) What I liked I liked the twists and turns of this story - I didn't see the ending coming and perhaps I should have, but it was really ...

Heya :) Straight on from the last part, the opening to this chapter makes absolutely no sense. I'm not a stickler for rules most of the time, but there are ...

Heya :) I enjoyed reading this. I actually started on Part 2, but liked it enough to come back to Part 1 and read Part 3 as well. Trust me, ...

Heya :) I've been away from YWS for a long time and just decided to drop in. So excuse me if this review isn't up to the YWS standards you ...

Heya :) The imagery of the first four lines smoldered in my mind as I witnessed the accident and the tragic loss. Then I was jolted into the present by ...

Heya :) Welcome to YWS. The title of your piece interested me enough to have a read. My thoughts are below. Please excuse the unstructured nature of my review. 1. ...

Heya Infinite, Thanks for requesting a review! Critique sandwich time! Hope you find it tasty ^^ 1. What did I like about this piece? > You conveyed the sense of ...

Heya Costa, Thanks for requesting a review! While you did mention you'd like me to check in at chapter 5, I figured it'd be a good idea to start at ...

Heya Light, Thanks for requesting a review! Like I said in my shop, poetry is definitely not a forte of mine, so please understand that this is your wheelhouse and ...

Heya Anarchy, Thanks for requesting a review! I'll be extra nit-picky because I liked this first chapter quite a lot. Perverse, isn't it? That said, critique sandwich time. 1. What ...

Heya Astral, First off, I haven't read any of the previous chapters. This has not actually ever been a problem for me, but with this chapter I am utterly lost. ...

Heya Lareine, I hesitated to review this. Why? I noticed a review you wrote that I quite liked because all of it was 100% true (or I at least agreed) ...

Heya Buz, I was a fan of the Walking Dead for the first couple of seasons, but then it got really boring. Just thought I'd mention that I somewhat know ...

Glauke, thanks for requesting a review! :) Critique sandwich time. 1. What did I like about this piece? > I enjoyed the imagery of the stanzas, each one telling me ...