Hi, Well done for writing this poem so well! You used personification to create wonderful visual effects for the reader. However, there are some things which could be improved, and ...

This poem really gave me goosebumps; you perfectly convey how love can have a dark side as well. However, I noticed two lines that didn’t really match the overall character ...

Hi, I think this is really nice! You used some really powerful phrases in this poem, and it also flows very well! My only criticism would be this: in the ...

Maths is the subject I’m worst at; I feel your pain! I like your sense of humor in this poem, you are so sporting! I think it flows very well ...

I think this a wonderful poem! There is a strong element of romance in it; I enjoyed it a lot because romance is my favorite genre to read. Your poem ...

This is really true Meghaji! I believe that there are many ways to become successful, it kind of works in the same way as when you are traveling on the ...

Hi Elinor! I enjoyed reading this poem very much; I particularly liked the strong emotion you conveyed through it. However, there are certain aspects about it that could be improved ...