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Hey people, ummm yeah im a rubish speller, im using an older web connection so i couldnt get spell cheker on. Also im guessing most of you guys are American? ...

Hey people, ummm yeah im a rubish speller, im using an older web connection so i couldnt get spell cheker on. Also im guessing most of you guys are American? ...

OK, maybe I missed the plot; I didnt see the whole basis of the story. This is written good, but maybe try adding more detail and more of a plot ...

@tenyo. yes its ment to be among the funny side. :p

ok ok right i know im only 14 but i was reallllyyy bored aha, i dunno why i wrote it but i swear i rated it as an 16? aha, ...

This is such a cute story! good job, yeah please do another, when their older and see if they've change or are the same!

This is very realistic, you can feel the heart brake radiating from the characters. Make sure your keep your grammar in check and try not to switch tenses. Keep up ...

A very beautiful touching poem, keep at it, you got talent dude!

FUDDDGGGING AMAZING :D I LOVED IT.

Thanks. :)

This is an over all good poem, but I feel it has a lack of emotion. Try to reach out more with the vocab too :) Hope this little bit ...

The story seems all about the talking, It doesnt give me any idea what the situation is. You need to add detail in, otherwise people arent going to want to ...

She is a pretty messed up girl, and yes, In parts of the story she takes drugs x

Thanks guys! I did happen to want It to be a clique love poem, so I gave the right Impression. Thanks for taking to time to review for me. ^^

this is sooo funny. seriously. i hate spoof's but even i laughed at this. good job!