scribblemonster

Firstly, I like the names of your two mains. Viking and Lake, I've never met anyone with those names. I like how it's not a typical cliche, that she doesn't ...

Ahaha, this is gold. Nice work, post something on my profile when you next update;) ~Megan~

I liked it, the poem had a meaningful message. The rhythm was rather singsongy and the last line is brilliant. I loved the; 'The losers, The moaners, The weepers, The ...

I love your lack of commers, somehow the distilded rhythm lets it flow and flows back to the story moral. The 'no' in the middle really seperates it, almost as ...

Oh, I'm intrigued! You managed to hook the characters onto my attention emmidiently, and you didn't explain 'why' or 'how' they get/got their powers. This adds mystery. A tiny error, ...

My opinion on your peom? Chocolate;) Although random, and slightly silly I liked it. The third stanza was my favourite, it made me laugh. ~Megan~

Wow, that was really deep. I loved the introduction, all the possible 'failures' you could have. I really loved it, it was gripping and you made me want to read ...

For somone without an older sister, i can tell you that you got the sibling rivalry right on target. I have to admit, I started reading the racoon bit and ...