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I copy/pasted this from Word. For some reason this happens with everything. I'll fix the words later. Thank you!

The rating is for the story as a whole, not just this chapter. Thank you!

I've set up the time line like the Greeks were more advanced than they actually were, *spoiler alert* there's going to be a catastrophic event that basically sends man back ...

Before any says anything, some of the words in this are spaced very close together. I'll fix it later. Enjoy!

The damned don't leave survivers as in they either kill or capture everyone. They capture people to use them as slaves until finally they kill and eat them. But they ...

Not bad. I'm not a big Frozen fan but I like what you've done with this. It's nice to see Elsa kind of accept her powers. I didn't find any ...

Very good, very creative. few things though, first off, why is she in drag? I know this is a short but what is her reason for becoming a knight? The ...

Ok, this is strange to me but cool nonetheless. The only error I found I found was when he is asking for the house, "...gingerbread house that has that has..." ...

Thanks for the review. I had wrote an intro. for this story and I used it in the description for the folder it's in but I guess that didn't work. ...

Damn, this is deep. Bravo. *claps* Ok, I couldn't find any simple errors. Honestly this is just plain good.

Okay. I have played Sims, and I understood what these characters are saying just as much as I do the Sims in game, not at all, but that just plays ...

yeah, this is actually the fourth chapter. I forgot to put that in the title. thanks though.

Thanks. you did. btw i changed her name to Kristen. long story. but ive been putting my new stuff on Wattpad.com. if you want to read them just look for ...

i guess i should've changed her name in this coppy huh? oh well

thanks. btw, ive changed her name to Kristen. Ik i said it was Rebecca but i changed because i have this other story with a woman named Rebecca and i ...