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I like your song! It is lively and flowing, has a clear and easy to follow rhytme. Morever, it's not as short as many other song (yeah, sometimes I see ...

Wow, amazing. This whole song is rythemed well, and every word falls just in the right place and order! But, one thing you have to take care for: make some ...

Are you having self- destruction inclination? This is one fearsome poem.... Oh, I'm joking, this is lovely. Exactly the same things I feel sometimes. I think you can add some ...

This is a good song, it seems to express your feeling toward someone you loved before, but then he hurt you. This is a common feeling that you've express with ...

Hi! This is quite an interesting story. I like the way new things are revealing to the reader- just in the right order and rate! However, there is somethings I'd ...

Oh, the absurd of darkness- it meant to hide the fearsome things, but in fact it terrifying us even more. Good job pointing it out. I liked the way you ...

Wow, amazing story. Only the thought about a little girl making her dream come true, i barely have words to describe how am I appriciate you. personally, I'd say your ...

Well, quite good. As someone who've read many books i can honestly say that this was just like reading a novel of an experienced author. Try to write chapter 2 ...

Very well written. I think combining the godness element with your feeling is greatly increasing the mystery. This is one of not many songs you just can't stop reading. generally, ...