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Hey ashely! I see you have a new story :!: Let's see what you got Okay, this is a story I wanted to write because I have always been interested ...

Cal's Character Contest #5 Word: 49: trees Picture: 3 here's the link: **** The patter of the rain on the umbrella slowed, and finally disappeared. “How is it?” Jacob whispered ...

Hey Sapphire! review as requested/earned :-) Crit Key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted Blue = If I don't feel like using red (this color has nothing to ...

Hey phantom! Here's my crit key: Red = comments Bold = Words I've inserted Blue = If I don't feel like using red let's do this thang!!! Hello everyone! I ...

Hey Love! I wanted to read the rest of your poetry! I'm excited! Here we go! Walking into the kitchen, where my mother's at. I try my best not to ...

Hey Sunshine! Here's my crit key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better Blue = If I don't feel like using red Let's do ...

Hey! Here's my crit key: Red = comments Bold = words I've inserted Blue = If I don't feel like using red :-) A/N: Extended metaphor for the win. Came ...

I second the Far from the Madding Crowd one and the Prophecy of the Stones Also (I ran around my house trying to find the worst books I have ever ...

Hey again fourthelement! Here's my crit. I hope it helps. Author's Note: Okay, here's the deal. Last year, I wrote a light sci-fi novel about six teenagers who were transformed ...

Hey Again! I didn't know you wrote poetry!!!!! My crit is below. I hope it helps. I nvisible forces that bind me to you, are - L ike selfish vines, ...

Hey! My crit key is as follows: Red = comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better Blue = If I don't feel like using red Let's ...

Hey Rubric! Thought I should check this out. Here's my crit key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think could work better Blue = if I ...

Hey here's my crit! The Mutts pieces don't have to be read in order. They're written in random order out of a list of 100 one-word prompts in a challenge ...

Hey kris! Here's my crit key: Red= My comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better Let's do this thing! Prologue It was m orning in the ...

Wow! That was great! Intense ending lines! Really sticks with you after you read them. I didn't have time for a whole line edits review so I'll just stick to ...